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December 5, 2012
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Looking at you by Akirahpaws Looking at you by Akirahpaws
A newer picture, but I like it when it looks a bit older. :)

Hope you like it. :meow:


ARTWORK COPYRIGHT © Akirahpaws 2012
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Hello my dear friend !!
Please don't be angry, but I just want to say my opinion !
I mean nothing bad to you ok?!

So ! Let's start with the fokus ^.^
I know you don't have the best camera and I know that you'll get a better one at christmas ...
The cat is a little bit fuzzy and disorted and the gras is in the fokus, I know that's automatic but I think you could try to manipulate it !
But that's not soooo awful !
I want to say that the bg is very good, because it fuzzy and disorted, more than the cat !!!

The colors: I like this crossed way you made it, but I have to say, that it's (for my taste) a bit too strong made ... I like the colors a lot, they are a bit like sepia, but not the same ^.^ The cats colors looks good because she's naturally (the colors aren't very different than her natural fur)

At all: I would to say, that I really like it and you made a good shot, but I also think that it's not perfect focused (is that right english??? :) ) The colors are cool but the design is a bit too strong, The cat isn't in the middle at all, that's really good, because it doesn't looks good when you take her in the middle of the picture, that would be disadvantageous and heavy !

I hope you respect my critic !!

yours, hotaroxx
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Babou-Shka Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Lovely shot!
Akirahpaws Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Thanks :D
Babou-Shka Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
You're welcome :)
Black-Sweater Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
U can't watch meh...i Watch uuu...*Stare at it*...It.'s....not....Blinking....
Akirahpaws Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Black-Sweater Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
X3333 my eyes hurt now >3<
Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought I felt someone watching me while walking. JK.
Akirahpaws Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
clavacatta Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
nice. it's realy good
Akirahpaws Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Thank you
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